Sep 26, 2010 07:18
13 yrs ago
1 viewer *
German term
Not a translator
ausgegliederten Abteilungen
German to English
Bus/Financial
Construction / Civil Engineering
new building/organization
Dieses Großprojekt schafft ebenfalls den nötigen Raum, um die derzeit in betriebsnahe Gebäude ausgegliederten Abteilungen, wieder unter einem Dach zu vereinen.
My version: This large-scale project also sets up the necessary space uniting all outsourced departments under one roof which were previously housed in various buildings nearby.
It sounds too wordy to me. Suggestions would be appreciated.
My version: This large-scale project also sets up the necessary space uniting all outsourced departments under one roof which were previously housed in various buildings nearby.
It sounds too wordy to me. Suggestions would be appreciated.
Proposed translations
(English)
| 3 +3 | This major project ... |
Armorel Young
|
| 4 | offsite departments |
itla
|
| 3 | This large project creates adequate space.... |
Raghunathan Rajagopalan
|
Proposed translations
+3
41 mins
Selected
This major project ...
also creates the space needed to reunite under one roof all the departments [that are] currently dispersed among nearby buildings.
or something along those lines.
(I'm not sure that ausgegliedert means "outsourced" in this context - I interpret it simply as "separated out" or "split off" - i.e. purely a geographical description).
or something along those lines.
(I'm not sure that ausgegliedert means "outsourced" in this context - I interpret it simply as "separated out" or "split off" - i.e. purely a geographical description).
4 KudoZ points awarded for this answer.
Comment: "I appreciate the feedback!"
2 hrs
Raghunathan Rajagopalan
Native in English
Quality legal / financial translation
Native in: English
Works in: German to English
Related KudoZ points
:
4
This large project creates adequate space....
This large project creates adequate space in the building to accommodate all its departments dispersed nearby.
another variation:
This LP creates space adequate enough to accommodate....... less preferred because in my opinion "adequate" and "enough" are nearly same
another variation:
This LP creates space adequate enough to accommodate....... less preferred because in my opinion "adequate" and "enough" are nearly same
2 days 6 hrs
offsite departments
I think "dispersed" is pretty good, but offsite might be better. Outsourced is definitely wrong.
Something went wrong...