Glossary entry (derived from question below)
Spanish term or phrase:
notas pútridas
English translation:
putrid notes
Spanish term
notas pútridas
Working on a cheese text.
The full sentence:
Son quesos que huelen un poco a vegetal fermentado, a lana y a veces aparecen notas pútridas, si bien eso es síntoma de una excesiva maduración.
What's the best way to say "notas pútridas?"
Thanks!
4 | putrid notes |
Daniel Coria
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4 | gamey overtones |
neilmac
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4 | rancid overtones or rancid notes |
Margaret Ikawa
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Non-PRO (2): Yvonne Gallagher, Carol Gullidge
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Proposed translations
putrid notes
In this respect, monitoring amino acid degradation during cheese ripening may ... sweaty, and putrid notes that probably contribute to ripe cheese aroma; this is ...
https://books.google.com.ar/books?id=OFzMBQAAQBAJ&pg=PA285&l...
barnyard goat, fruit, tropical fruit (pineapple), lemon, sour milk (lactic acid), sour (acetic acid), sweat, cheese, bacon, spice, clove, and even putrid notes.
https://books.google.com.ar/books?id=2qZ_CgAAQBAJ&pg=PA18&lp...
Feb 16, 2018 - PDF | Six leading brands of mature/vintage full-fat Cheddar cheese ... C3 Sour, savoury, slight putrid notes, not balanced, slightly crumbly 4.
https://www.researchgate.net/publication/284813893_How_varia...
gamey overtones
And the adjective "gamey" is the first euphemism that sprang to mind when I saw the query.
"It tasted a bit gamey in a bad way but I guess it depends partly on what you do with it. "
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Note added at 30 mins (2019-10-30 10:04:35 GMT)
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https://www.thefreedictionary.com/gaminess
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Note added at 31 mins (2019-10-30 10:05:42 GMT)
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The term is also used to describe wines:
"It offers pepper and ginger spices, gamey overtones and intense fruit, with blackberry aromas bordering on the intensity of an aerosol room-freshner."
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Note added at 32 mins (2019-10-30 10:06:25 GMT)
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Practical Professional Cookery - Page 473 - Google Books Result
https://books.google.es › books
Harry Louis Cracknell, R. J. Kaufmann - 1999 - Cooking
The flavour is delicate with no gamey overtones...
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Note added at 33 mins (2019-10-30 10:08:01 GMT)
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"They/these are cheeses that smell a little like fermented vegetables, wool and sometimes rather gamey notes appear, although that is a symptom of excessive maturation/ripening."
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Note added at 43 mins (2019-10-30 10:17:06 GMT)
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Whether you agree with "overtones" as a translation of "notes" is moot. It's simply the first thing that I thought of...
It tasted a bit gamey and I wasn't crazy about it
I'll bet those steaks tasted a bit gamey,
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Carol Gullidge
: gamey overtones is nice, but generally too positive an attribute in this case, imo! This is about over-ripe cheese - one that has been subjected to "excesiva maduración"//I agree it wouldn't sell! However I don't believe this in fact a marketing question
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Sorry, Carol, I'm not buying into it. I baulk at describing even strong blue cheeses like Cabrales as putrid/rancid if I'm trying to sell them.
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rancid overtones or rancid notes
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Carol Gullidge
: again, the ST would probably have specified "rancio", which is another term applied to overripe cheeses but is not quite the same as putrid. Btw, for some reason I couldn't open your link!
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Robert Carter
: Great link to that glossary, but I'm not sure about rancid, because it usually refers to a process in fats. I would assume "pútrido" relates to a bacterial process, but after looking at your glossary, I can't see anything that fits (other than putrid).
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Yvonne Gallagher
: with others. "putrid" is best
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Discussion
" In general, fatty acids originated from [...] yield sweaty, rancid, fecal, putrid and ester-resembling flavors"
Note the delightful inclusion of "fecal", as if "rancid" and "putrid" were not already unpalatable enough! But this does show that the two terms exist and are distinct from one another.
"Handbook of Dairy Foods Analysis"
https://books.google.co.uk/books?id=OFzMBQAAQBAJ&pg=PA285&lp...
And one of the very first principles we're taught as translation students is that we must never, ever, ever adapt a target text to suit our own likes/ dislikes/ morals/ preferences/ squeamishness or any other values as long as there exists an equivalent translation in the target language, i.e.one that expresses the same meaning (or closest possible equivalent) as the ST, with all of its connotations. Unless there are very exceptional cultural reasons, the TT needs to reflect the robustness of the ST.
for instance, your reasons for rejecting the obvious "putrid notes", which is fairly widely used in relation to cheese, especially when overripe