Feb 16, 2016 21:31
8 yrs ago
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Spanish term

years old, years of age, or aged

Spanish to English Other Tourism & Travel Regulaciones de un tour
TOUR EN CRUCERO
Edad mínima para participar: 16 años
Niños de 5 a 11 años pagarán la tarifa de menor
Niños menores de 4 años no pagan tarifa, pero no se les asigna asiento.

I usually use "years old", but most travel agencies use "years of age" or "aged" (omiting "years") on their web sites. Which one is correct for the regulations of a tour?

Minimum age to participate: 16 years old
Children aged from 5 to 11 are eligible for the child fare (sometimes "aged" is omitted)
Children under 4 years of age are free, but they do not occupy a seat.

Is there a grammatical rule to use them?
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Feb 16, 2016 21:41: Jack Doughty changed "Language pair" from "English" to "Spanish to English"

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translation for the whole thing

This was originally an English-English question, which in some ways was a more appropriate place for it, but it was moved because the text itself is in Spanish.

Here's my suggestion for the whole thing. As Tony says, it's not set in stone, but you can usually leave out "years".

Edad mínima para participar: 16 años
Niños de 5 a 11 años pagarán la tarifa de menor
Niños menores de 4 años no pagan tarifa, pero no se les asigna asiento.

Minimum age: 16
Children aged 5 to 11 pay the reduced rate
Children under 4 travel free, but must sit on an adult's lap.



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I've just realised it says the minimum age is 16, so the next two lines don't appear to make sense.
Peer comment(s):

agree Michele Fauble
1 hr
agree Cheyne Bull
2 hrs
agree Robert Carter : You're right about it not making sense. And what about the 4-year olds? :-)
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agree Sheila Wilson
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agree Cecilia Gowar
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agree Lisa Jane : I guess it could mean 16 is the minimum age if unaccompanied by an adult
15 hrs
Yes, could be.
agree AllegroTrans
15 hrs
agree Tony M : I think Aser is simply citing 3 possible examples, with no logical link between them.
17 hrs
I wondered about that, but "regulations of a tour" suggests that they all come from the same source
agree kane2013 : Except for the second one: Children ages 5 to 11... I disagree that this is "wrong" because there are so many legitimate sources that use this structure.
17 hrs
No, ages would be wrong, but thanks for agreeing.
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laregly interchangeable, but...

... certain sentence structures tend to lend themselves better to one or the other form.

Note that 'years old' can also be used in relatively informal contexts, whereas both the others are only really appropriate for a more formal register — as, of course, you have here!
Peer comment(s):

agree Sheila Wilson : 'years of age' is a bit long, and 'years old' is rather informal, but both are possible in some contexts.
11 hrs
Thanks, Sheila!
agree AllegroTrans
15 hrs
Thanks, C!
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