Dec 2, 2002 02:18
21 yrs ago
English term
electric equipment
Non-PRO
English
Tech/Engineering
Design, development and fabrication of supervisory control/detection electric equipment, communication/information communication equipment and their annexed services (repair and remodel)
I would like to know if the above OK.
Thank you very much.
I would like to know if the above OK.
Thank you very much.
Responses
+13
5 mins
Selected
No
It is difficult to judge without the original but here is an approximation:
Design, development and manufacturing of elctrical supervisory control and detection equipment, communication or information equipment and related services (repair and overhaul).
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Note added at 2002-12-02 02:29:19 (GMT)
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Read \"electrical\"
\"fabrication\" has a negative connotation
\"remodel\" is not bad but \"remodelling\" is preferable
\"annexed\" added, appended, incorporated, etc.
Design, development and manufacturing of elctrical supervisory control and detection equipment, communication or information equipment and related services (repair and overhaul).
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Note added at 2002-12-02 02:29:19 (GMT)
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Read \"electrical\"
\"fabrication\" has a negative connotation
\"remodel\" is not bad but \"remodelling\" is preferable
\"annexed\" added, appended, incorporated, etc.
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Comment: "Thank you very much for your help.
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6 hrs
Design, development and manufacturing of electrical supervisory control and/or detection equipment,
some changes:
Design, development and manufacturing of electrical supervisory control and/or detection equipment, communication and/or information communication equipment and their related services (repair and remodelling).
Design, development and manufacturing of electrical supervisory control and/or detection equipment, communication and/or information communication equipment and their related services (repair and remodelling).
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