Dec 2, 2002 02:18
21 yrs ago
English term

electric equipment

Non-PRO English Tech/Engineering
Design, development and fabrication of supervisory control/detection electric equipment, communication/information communication equipment and their annexed services (repair and remodel)

I would like to know if the above OK.
Thank you very much.

Responses

+13
5 mins
Selected

No

It is difficult to judge without the original but here is an approximation:

Design, development and manufacturing of elctrical supervisory control and detection equipment, communication or information equipment and related services (repair and overhaul).

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Note added at 2002-12-02 02:29:19 (GMT)
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Read \"electrical\"

\"fabrication\" has a negative connotation
\"remodel\" is not bad but \"remodelling\" is preferable
\"annexed\" added, appended, incorporated, etc.
Peer comment(s):

agree Selcuk Akyuz
7 mins
Thanks
agree Teresa Reinhardt : I'd delete "supervisory", I guess it's part of a literal translation of control equipment. But it's all hard to say without knowing what the original said
41 mins
Agree on both counts
agree Refugio
1 hr
agree Dolly Xu
1 hr
agree Nancy Arrowsmith
2 hrs
agree Chris Rowson (X) : Yes, the "supervisory" may be redundant, or maybe monitoring is meant - or maybe it even really does supervise something ...
2 hrs
And the original may be in a language we don't understand
agree Attila Piróth
4 hrs
agree Fuad Yahya
5 hrs
agree achisholm
5 hrs
agree Elvira Stoianov
6 hrs
agree Arthur Borges : Or perhaps "remodelling" should be "upgrading".
7 hrs
Possible
agree jerrie
7 hrs
agree EDLING (X)
9 hrs
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4 KudoZ points awarded for this answer. Comment: "Thank you very much for your help. "
6 hrs

Design, development and manufacturing of electrical supervisory control and/or detection equipment,

some changes:

Design, development and manufacturing of electrical supervisory control and/or detection equipment, communication and/or information communication equipment and their related services (repair and remodelling).
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