Jun 17, 2003 20:02
21 yrs ago
English term
sentence
English
Art/Literary
reincarnation
it seems/looks???? as if half of your heart has been taken away from you, yet fear not, for half of it flew (here) inside my hands
I know it is horrible English, that's why I wish to have your appreciated criticisms and suggestions
I know it is horrible English, that's why I wish to have your appreciated criticisms and suggestions
Responses
| 4 +3 | My 2cents. |
Alaa Zeineldine
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| 3 +2 | Another idea |
Kim Metzger
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Responses
+3
9 mins
Alaa Zeineldine
Egypt
Egypt
Native in English
&
English
Egypt
The best in IT ... and in Automotive
Native in: Arabic 
, English
Works in: English to Arabic, Arabic to English, English, and 1 more.
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198
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My 2cents.
Fear not, for while half of your heart appears to have been taken away from you, yet the other half has flown here, right into the safety of my very hands.
4 KudoZ points awarded for this answer.
Comment: "thanks a lot"
+2
23 mins
Kim Metzger
Mexico
Mexico
Native in English
&
English
Mexico
Committed to Quality and Service
Native in: English (Variant: US) 
Works in: German to English
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2249
Another idea
You may feel that half of your heart has been stolen from you, yet fear not, for that half flew here, inside my hands.
Peer comment(s):
| agree |
Alaa Zeineldine
: It is too late for a context question Kim, but you and I were looking at different halves. I wonder which half the author had fly inside his hands, the same one that was apparently taken away, or the other half? Whatever that means:)
26 mins
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Yes, too bad. It was an interesting question and could have led to a lively debate!
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| agree |
Christopher Crockett
: Haste makes waste, no matter which half of it is wasted.
18 hrs
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