Glossary entry

English term or phrase:

that we will implement

English answer:

we will then implement

Added to glossary by Henry Hinds
Feb 10, 2005 03:36
19 yrs ago
English term

that we will implement

Non-PRO English Other IT (Information Technology)
In a text which an society describes the products and services available to its clients(Canada) :

It gives us the possibility to learn, experiment and master in our laboratory that we will further implement in your environment.

Can we say that, or we have to say "what we will further implement in your environment"?

Discussion

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Alaa Zeineldine Feb 10, 2005:
Can you give examples of the things that will be "implemented"? This could help us come up with more suitable wording

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we will then implement

Obviously written by someone whose native language is not English.

It gives us the possibility to learn, experiment and master in our laboratory that we will further implement in your environment.

My take on it:
This enables us to learn, experiment and master in our laboratory, everything we will then implement in your environment.

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4 KudoZ points awarded for this answer. Comment: "Thank you! Yes, it wasn't written by a persone whose native language is English :-)"
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the products and services

Of your options, i would suggest "what", but better still would be to say what will be implemented: the products and services we will implement...
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agree SirReaL : specifying helps
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... that which shall be further implemented in your environment.

"It gives us the possibility to learn, experiment and master in our laboratory, that which shall be further implemented in your environment."

Hth,

Sanjay.

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learn... what we will then be able to implement in your environment

is what I think it means
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agree SirReaL : what == that which
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what we will implement

After the fact, but I hope this helps: change that into what as suggested already, but also get rid of "further" and do not replace it with anything else. No need for "then", "later", etc.

"We wil learn, ..., what we will implement in your environment"
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