Nov 21, 2004 14:49
19 yrs ago
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September sales of $50.2 Million broke the prior monthly sales record set in March, and with another strong sales month in October ($47.5 Million) we have topped the prior monthly record set last October in seven of the last eight months.
9月份以5.02千万美元销售额打破了3月份创造的销售纪录，加上10月份的强劲销售额（4.75千万美元），在过去的八个月里，有七个月的销售额打破了去年10月份创造的月销售纪录。
请问这句话翻译有问题吗？谢谢
9月份以5.02千万美元销售额打破了3月份创造的销售纪录，加上10月份的强劲销售额（4.75千万美元），在过去的八个月里，有七个月的销售额打破了去年10月份创造的月销售纪录。
请问这句话翻译有问题吗？谢谢
Proposed translations
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| 4 +2 | 意思是对的． |
Mark Xiang
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| 5 +2 | TRY |
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Proposed translations
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13 mins
Mark Xiang
Native in Chinese
Works in field
20 YRS AS MECHANICAL/TECHNICAL ENGINEER!
Native in: Chinese 
Works in: English to Chinese, Chinese to English
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意思是对的．
可否考虑将＂5.02千万美元＂改成＂502０万美元＂？
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Comment: "thanks!"
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6 hrs
TRY
没有错误, 但读起来有点令人茫然.
在过去的八个月里--> 在3到10月这八个月里......
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Note added at 6 hrs 1 min (2004-11-21 20:51:05 GMT)
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加上10月份的强劲销售额---> 加上10月份的强劲销售态势
在过去的八个月里--> 在3到10月这八个月里......
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Note added at 6 hrs 1 min (2004-11-21 20:51:05 GMT)
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加上10月份的强劲销售额---> 加上10月份的强劲销售态势
Peer comment(s):
| agree |
Zhoudan
: agree with your 强劲销售态势
3 hrs
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| agree |
Cathy Johnson
: agree with 强劲销售态势
11 hrs
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