Russian term
В случае замены обеспечения...на другую форму обеспечения
обеспечение - security.
Интересует грамматика:
1. If the security provided in the form of Security Deposit is substituted with (replaced by?) another (any other) form of security, funds shall be returned to...
2. If the security provided in the form of Security Deposit is (has been?) changed for...
Или использовать "should":
Should the security...be changed for any other form of security...?
| 3 | Should the security be replaced by any other form |
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| 4 | If the security... is changed into another form of security |
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Proposed translations
Should the security be replaced by any other form
The original "form of" security deposit is "replaced by" or "exchanged for" the new form. "Replaced by" is easier to understand because an "exchange" would be offered by someone, who is not identified.
"Should" is the hypothetical subjunctive, the most technically correct choice. "If" is acceptable but not as formal.
"Any" is better than "another" because "another" introduces the false possibility that one kind of substitute would be governed by the agreement while another kind would not.
So, "should the security be replaced by any other form..."
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If the security... is changed into another form of security
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TechLawDC
: You have used the wrong definition for "security" (repeatedly!!!)! (This is somewhat surprising, since the Asker has taken the trouble to define it himself/herself.)(!)
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a fungible, negotiable financial instrument that holds some type of monetary value
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