Nov 13, 2017 23:17
6 yrs ago
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Spanish term
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Native in: Spanish (Variant: Venezuelan)
Works in: English to Spanish, Spanish to English, Spanish
serio y responsable en el manejo de sus operaciones
Spanish to English
Bus/Financial
Finance (general)
Estoy traduciendo una referencia bancaria venezolana:
"El Sr. xxx y la Sra. xxx son considerados por esta institución bancaria un cliente **serio y responsable en el manejo de sus operaciones**.
Tengo problemas con la redacción de la oración: are serious/reliable and responsible clients...
Muchas gracias por sus sugerencias
"El Sr. xxx y la Sra. xxx son considerados por esta institución bancaria un cliente **serio y responsable en el manejo de sus operaciones**.
Tengo problemas con la redacción de la oración: are serious/reliable and responsible clients...
Muchas gracias por sus sugerencias
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2 hrs
Robert Forstag
United States
United States
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Translating words, preserving meaning
Native in: English
Works in: Spanish to English, English
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132
Spanish term (edited):
un cliente serio y responsable en el manejo de sus operaciones
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customers who manage their [personal] finances in a serious and responsible manner
At least in English, it seems odd to collapse a married couple into a single client, even if (as appears to be the case here) they hold a joint account at the bank.
I think that “manejo de sus opraciones” refers in general here to the couple’s management of their (personal) finances. “Operations” in English would suggest transactions within a business context, but there is no suggestion that these persons are anything other than personal banking customers.
I think that “manejo de sus opraciones” refers in general here to the couple’s management of their (personal) finances. “Operations” in English would suggest transactions within a business context, but there is no suggestion that these persons are anything other than personal banking customers.
4 KudoZ points awarded for this answer.
Comment: "Muchísimas gracias"
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12 mins
Daniel Liberman
United States
United States
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United States
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Native in: Portuguese (Variant: Brazilian) 
, English
Works in: Portuguese to English, English to Portuguese, Spanish to English, and 1 more.
serious and responsible in the management of their operations
Yo considero que "serious" and "responsible" está muy bien.
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49 mins
Maximo Wilhelm Muñoz
Guatemala
Guatemala
Native in Spanish
&
English
Specializes in field
Guatemala
International Support Services
Native in: Spanish (Variant: Latin American) , English (Variant: British)
Works in: Spanish to English, English to Spanish
Related KudoZ points
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24
formal and responsible client in the handling for their operations
EN: "El Sr. xxx y la Sra. xxx son considerados por esta institución bancaria un cliente **serio y responsable en el manejo de sus operaciones**.
ES: “Mr. Xxx and Mrs. Xxx are considered by this banking institution as a **formal and responsible client in the handling for their operations**.
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¡Saludos!
ES: “Mr. Xxx and Mrs. Xxx are considered by this banking institution as a **formal and responsible client in the handling for their operations**.
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¡Saludos!
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Robert Forstag
: Even without the glaring error of “for” rather than “of,” the English here would be tortured and unnatural.
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Um, yeah, I agree the preposition was placed there by mistake. Any other issue? I honestly think IT, the English language, WOULD NOT be tortured at all as you are treating yourself by expressing THE MERE ABOVE EXPRESSION tortures your mother tongue Rob.
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philgoddard
: Robert is right. Neither your answer nor your response to him sound like native English, and it doesn't say anything about "formal".//Three, not ten.
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Well, I have lately, just today, received about 10 agrees in this site. Why should I worry? because of your 2 disagrees? Relax guys, no torture needed here.
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