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Jun 3, 2015 21:54
9 yrs ago
Russian term

провел набор студентов

Russian to English Other Education / Pedagogy
В 2014 г. ХХХ Университет провел набор студентов.
Proposed translations (English)
4 student admission was carried out by
4 +4 enrolled students/ had an annual student enrollment
4 +2 had its (first) student intake

Discussion

Lazyt3ch Jun 8, 2015:
@Strel > Вроде так и получается? Например, In 2014 new students were enrolled at Moscow State university.

Советую убрать "were" и написать "university" с заглавной. Если текст ориентирован на американцев, после года можно поставить запятую.

P.S. Каюсь, сам поначалу ошибся насчет переходности глагола (to) enroll.
Strel (asker) Jun 4, 2015:
Спасибо!!
Turdimurod Rakhmanov Jun 4, 2015:
Да, так правильно
Strel (asker) Jun 4, 2015:
University в конце Вроде так и получается? Например, In 2014 new students were enrolled at Moscow State university.
Turdimurod Rakhmanov Jun 4, 2015:
должен быть в passive voice как у вас
Turdimurod Rakhmanov Jun 4, 2015:
Да возможен но не university enrolled, university должен быть в конце
Strel (asker) Jun 4, 2015:
Возможен ли вообще такой вариант? In 2014 new students were enrolled at XXX university.
Turdimurod Rakhmanov Jun 4, 2015:
here провел набор студентов should be stressed В 2014 г. ХХХ Университет провел набор студентов.
Здесь университет должен быть в конце на английском как правило here провел набор студентов should be stressed not university

Proposed translations

5 hrs
Selected

student admission was carried out by

В 2014 г. ХХХ Университет провел набор студентов.
I would translate:
Student admission was carried out by XXX University in 2014.

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enrolment (зачисление)-the act of officially joining a course, school, etc.; the number of people who do this :
Admissions to a place such as a school or university are the people who are allowed to enter or join it.

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Student admission procedure was carried out (another choice )

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or Selection of students was carried out

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Note added at 6 hrs (2015-06-04 04:39:26 GMT)
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Students were admitted by
Example sentence:

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Peer comment(s):
neutral Lazyt3ch : Looks like Runglish to me... P.S. By “Runglish” I meant not the term “admission”, but the whole phrase...
2 mins
http://www.saimia.fi/haku/fi/degree-programmes/apply/admissi... http://egov.kz/wps/portal/Content?contentPath=/egovcontent/m...
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4 KudoZ points awarded for this answer. Comment: "Thank you. Decided to use "were enrolled" as you advised in discussion panel."
+4
20 mins

enrolled students/ had an annual student enrollment

The first translation is word for word, the second one tries to fit it in the context.


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Note added at 22 mins (2015-06-03 22:17:14 GMT)
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If a number of students is indicated, the first option is possible, too, like in this example:

For the bigger-is-better type student, the 10 universities with the largest undergraduate populations in fall 2013 enrolled an average of 43,186 students.
http://www.usnews.com/education/best-colleges/the-short-list...
Peer comment(s):
agree YESHWANT UMRALKAR
2 hrs
Thanks
agree cyhul
3 hrs
Thanks
agree Lazyt3ch : I suspect that in 2014, the University enrolled students for the first time, so I support the first version (“enrolled students”). P.S. Maybe my suspicion is wrong, but why not specify the number of students, etc.? The sentence seems to be incomplete.
4 hrs
Thanks. I agree the sentence seems incomplete. So, you may be right about the first time. The 2nd option will work, too, in this case: In 2014 ... had the first student enrollment.
agree Liubov Bazhenova
9 hrs
Спасибо
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+2
7 hrs

had its (first) student intake

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Peer comment(s):
agree Turdimurod Rakhmanov : Yes it works, but I would not set a stress on university but what the university did, in English the word order is different than Russian.
12 mins
Thank you :-)
agree Lazyt3ch
21 mins
Thank you :-)
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