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English term or phrase:
Rephrase
English answer:
This is a temporary measure.
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kaalema
Sep 17, 2003 12:20
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I NEED TO REPHRASE THIS! HELP!
This is a temporary measure that, once it becomes unnecessary, you will be informed of. By putting such measures into effect, we hope that further restrictive measures will not have to be adopted
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This is a temporary measure that, once it becomes unnecessary, you will be informed of. By putting such measures into effect, we hope that further restrictive measures will not have to be adopted
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+4
17 mins
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This is a temporary measure.
We will inform you once it is no longer necessary. We hope that taking such measures will obviate the to [OR will make it unnecessary to] adopt [OR implement] further restrictive measures.
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hirselina
21 mins
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agree |
Grace Anderson
: I prefer the "no longer necessary" bit. Of course, it should be "obviate the need to"
57 mins
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yes, of course it should.... Thanks.
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agree |
Catherine Norton
: Has a word been left out between "the" and "to"?
7 hrs
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yess.... the need to....
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agree |
Sally van der Graaff
1 day 6 hrs
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2 KudoZ points awarded for this answer.
Comment: "I would have loved to give a couple of you points, but we all know that's not possible. Thank you, EVERYONE, for your input. K"
+2
2 mins
here goes....
This is a temporary measure and we will inform you once it becomes unnecessary. We hope that further restrictive measures will not have to be adopted as a result of putting such measures into effect.
I take it it was the first sentence that was causing you the main problem.
HTH
Alison
I take it it was the first sentence that was causing you the main problem.
HTH
Alison
+1
7 mins
Okay, I'll try....
This is a temporary measure, and we will inform you when it is to be abandoned. We hope that such action will make the introduction of even stricter measures unnecessary.
Frankly, I think the writer ought to be the one to rewrite it - only s/he knows what s/he meant....
Frankly, I think the writer ought to be the one to rewrite it - only s/he knows what s/he meant....
+1
10 mins
This is a temporary measure which will remain in effect until you are informed that it has become...
This is a temporary measure and we will inform you once it becomes unnecessary. We hope that further restrictive measures will not have to be adopted as a result of putting such measures into effect.
Suggestion:
This is a temporary measure which will remain in effect until you are informed that it has become unnecessary. It is our hope that further restritive measures will not have to be adopted as a result of putting such measures into effect.
Suggestion:
This is a temporary measure which will remain in effect until you are informed that it has become unnecessary. It is our hope that further restritive measures will not have to be adopted as a result of putting such measures into effect.
+3
26 mins
Here is an attempt:
This is only a temporary measure. You will be notified as soon as this measure becomes unnecessary. By putting such measures into effect, we hope to eliminate the need for adopting further restrictive measures.
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Note added at 36 mins (2003-09-17 12:57:11 GMT)
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I wish we have the liberty to change some of the words (e.g. adopting further restrictive measure > imposing further restrictions), but as David pointed out, we really do not know the intended meaning.
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Note added at 36 mins (2003-09-17 12:57:11 GMT)
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I wish we have the liberty to change some of the words (e.g. adopting further restrictive measure > imposing further restrictions), but as David pointed out, we really do not know the intended meaning.
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