Apr 23, 2011 00:46
13 yrs ago
English term
China
would have been my choice to keep
English to Chinese
Tech/Engineering
IT (Information Technology)
lightweight laptops
Of all the laptops reviewed in our Test center in the past year, this model ***would have been my choice to keep***.
在我们测试中心去年测评的所有笔记本电脑中，这款机子***可能是我钟爱的选择***。
觉得不满意。
在我们测试中心去年测评的所有笔记本电脑中，这款机子***可能是我钟爱的选择***。
觉得不满意。
Proposed translations
(Chinese)
| 4 | （这个型号我）宁愿作为个人保留型号；宁愿留作私房；宁愿留作己用 |
Linguist Laureate
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| 4 | 是我会选用的 |
Talkington
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| 4 | 我可能会选择此型号 |
Ivan Niu
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Proposed translations
2 hrs
Linguist Laureate
China
China
Native in Chinese
China
Accredited & Acclaimed En=Ch Translator
Native in: Chinese
Works in: English to Chinese, Chinese to English, Japanese to Chinese, and 1 more.
Related KudoZ points
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215
Selected
（这个型号我）宁愿作为个人保留型号；宁愿留作私房；宁愿留作己用
虚拟语气
3 KudoZ points awarded for this answer.
Comment: "谢谢！"
5 hrs
Talkington
Native in English
&
Chinese
Chinese, English
Native in: Chinese 
, English
Works in: English to Chinese, Chinese to English
是我会选用的
我觉得把后半句语序调整一下会更好，整句翻译成：...，我个人会选用这一款机器。
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Note added at 5 hrs (2011-04-23 06:26:01 GMT)
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刚看了楼上的答案，觉得他说的“这个型号”比“这款机子”更好一些。
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Note added at 5 hrs (2011-04-23 06:26:01 GMT)
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刚看了楼上的答案，觉得他说的“这个型号”比“这款机子”更好一些。
23 hrs
我可能会选择此型号
this model would have been my choice to keep.
我觉得可以用“我”（而不用model）为主语来处理这个句子：我可能会选择此型号。通顺一点。
我觉得可以用“我”（而不用model）为主语来处理这个句子：我可能会选择此型号。通顺一点。
Note from asker:
| keep的意思没有翻译出来。 |
Discussion
He means he WOULDN'T want it unless (this part is not cited here in the post here). I would rather go with Talkington's and add some Chinese tonal words, like:
或许有可能成为我的选择