May 30, 2010 19:21
14 yrs ago
French term
univers grillagé
French to English
Art/Literary
Poetry & Literature
"Pour XXX (a Romanian artist) qui a vécu les quarante premières années de sa vie dans un univers grillagé - le gris est aussi une couleur bien particulière."
Proposed translations
(English)
Proposed translations
+4
35 mins
Selected
fenced-in world
I think this is one of those places where 'world' is more natural in EN for 'univers' in FR — cf. titles like « L'univers de la porcelaine » > "The World of Porcelain"
And the idea of 'grillage' is so specific, and an image so inextricably associated with the old totalitarian regimes etc., I think it would be a pity to water that down.
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Good point, I hadn't spotted that...
And the idea of 'grillage' is so specific, and an image so inextricably associated with the old totalitarian regimes etc., I think it would be a pity to water that down.
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Good point, I hadn't spotted that...
Note from asker:
| Wordplay? There's gris in grillage - or am I going mad with all these colours? You are right - no watering down, rather watering up! |
Peer comment(s):
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Travelin Ann
5 mins
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Thanks, Ann!
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Emma Paulay
12 mins
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Thanks, Emma!
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Chris Hall
48 mins
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Thanks, Chris!
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Alison Sabedoria (X)
11 hrs
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Thanks, W/A!
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4 KudoZ points awarded for this answer.
Comment: "Thanks a lot."
9 mins
Chris Hall
Native in English
Works in field
219 témoignages et ils ne cessent pas...
Native in: English (Variants: British, UK)
Works in: French to English, English
Related KudoZ points
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20
enclosed universe
Pour XXX (a Romanian artist) qui a vécu les quarante premières années de sa vie dans un univers grillagé - le gris est aussi une couleur bien particulière.
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For XXX (a Romanian artist) who has lived the first forty years of his/her life in an enclosed universe - grey is also a very particular/specific colour.
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For XXX (a Romanian artist) who has lived the first forty years of his/her life in an enclosed universe - grey is also a very particular/specific colour.
51 mins
Gad Kohenov
Israel
Israel
Native in French
Israel
30 years of experience+satisfied clients
Native in: French 
, Hebrew
Works in: English to Hebrew, Hebrew to English, French to Hebrew, and 8 more.
Related KudoZ points
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4
behind the iron curtain/boxed in/hemmed in/cloistered
several ideas and there more.
+3
1 hr
Carol Gullidge
United Kingdom
United Kingdom
Native in English
Specializes in field
United Kingdom
poetically precise prose with... panache
Native in: English 
Works in: French to English, Spanish to English, English
Related KudoZ points
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80
(a world) behind wire
evokes all kinds of internment/imprisonment/incarceration/curtailed freedom...
or you could go for something more mundane (and less metaphorical) like "a life of internment"
his first forty years were spent confined to a life of imprisonnment (or whatever...)...
or you could go for something more mundane (and less metaphorical) like "a life of internment"
his first forty years were spent confined to a life of imprisonnment (or whatever...)...
Note from asker:
| And there are bits of wire in his sculpture, you clever one! |
Peer comment(s):
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Chris Hall
7 mins
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many thanks Chris! I have to confess that I had no idea though that the sculpture featured bits of wire
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Alison Sabedoria (X)
: Clairvoyant translating; I like it - could outrun MT/CAT any day!
11 hrs
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many thanks Wordeffect! Oh dear, yes, wouldn't that be good!
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mimi 254
12 hrs
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many thanks mimi!
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1 hr
polyglot45
Native in French
&
English
Native in: English , French
Works in: English to French, French to English, German to French, and 4 more.
Related KudoZ points
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52
behind barbed wire
nuance
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Note added at 1 hr (2010-05-30 20:54:20 GMT)
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or a barbed wire fence
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Note added at 1 hr (2010-05-30 20:54:20 GMT)
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or a barbed wire fence
1 hr
claude-andrew
France
France
Native in English
France
Bilingual scientist English French
Native in: English
Works in: English to French, French to English, English
Related KudoZ points
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8
fenced-off world
Conveys the idea of isolation from the rest of the world
1 day 42 mins
Verginia Ophof
Belize
Belize
Native in English
Specializes in field
Belize
Near Native Proficiency in Source langua
Native in: English
Works in: Portuguese to English, Dutch to English, French to English
Related KudoZ points
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16
repressed/restrained world
just another suggestion as this might tie in with grey
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