Glossary entry

English term or phrase:

big in production, big in distribution, unique in quality

English answer:

giant, colossus

Added to glossary by RHELLER
Jan 28, 2003 19:51
21 yrs ago
English term

big in production, big in distribution, unique in quality

English Marketing
Greetings
I am attempting to render an advertising strapline (Italian to English) and I am trying to get a feel for this (rather literal) proposal, but I could really use a little feedback from some other native speakers if anyone has a moment to spare
Thanks indeed
Derek

Discussion

Non-ProZ.com Jan 28, 2003:
Big, etc. Trouble is, they really mean "big", i.e. they manufacture and distribute large volumes of products
Non-ProZ.com Jan 28, 2003:
Hi Fuad, we're talking about crawler undercarriages and ground engaging tools for earthmovers here
Fuad Yahya Jan 28, 2003:
What is the product?

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the last 2 parts sound good but I wouldn't recommend using "big" twice

how about other adjectives for production, like:
detailed
accurate
experienced
extraordinary
specialized
highly-specialized
spectacular
just a few ideas

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Note added at 2003-01-29 04:48:04 (GMT)
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just saw your added note.

enormous
gigantic
large
great
man-size(d)
supersized
Peer comment(s):

agree Tanja Abramovic (X)
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4 KudoZ points awarded for this answer. Comment: "Thanks indeed to Rita et al. This was most helpful. The fact that, while no one actually vetoed it, the "big big" solution got a lukewarm reception at best, pursuaded me to develop it by resorting to a cautious use of synonyms as advised. In the end, after much head scratching I sent off two alternatives in addition to the literal rendering, viz (fwiw) "A giant in production and distribution. A legend in quality", and the slighty cornier "A giant in production, a colossus in distribution, a legend in quality". I expect the company will stick with the literal and alien sounding proposal. Such is life. Other considerations aside, I opened the local paper today to find a headline informing me that the company to whose products this message refers is about to go to the wall. So I suppose that will mean no pay for anyone - as if we were interested in filthy lucre... ha. Maximum respect to you all, Derek"
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ground-breaking

as in breaking new ground

or earth-shattering

as alternatives to 'big'?
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3 hrs

massive

How about playing with synonyms for big:

"Huge production! Massive distribution! Unparalleled quality!"

Brevity is a boon in advertising :-)
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9 hrs

GREAT / grand / outstanding

I like the previous suggestions, too, but what about using "great" or even "grand" as a replacement? Big surely is not the snappiest choice... :)

Great or grand may be applied for all three categories, IMHO.
"Outstanding" might also work.
Or go crazy and just simply say,
"The Grand Masters of Production, Distribution, and Quality!" ;)

FWIW,
Ildiko
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