Glossary entry (derived from question below)
English term or phrase:
big in production, big in distribution, unique in quality
English answer:
giant, colossus
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RHELLER
Jan 28, 2003 19:51
21 yrs ago
English term
big in production, big in distribution, unique in quality
English
Marketing
Greetings
I am attempting to render an advertising strapline (Italian to English) and I am trying to get a feel for this (rather literal) proposal, but I could really use a little feedback from some other native speakers if anyone has a moment to spare
Thanks indeed
Derek
I am attempting to render an advertising strapline (Italian to English) and I am trying to get a feel for this (rather literal) proposal, but I could really use a little feedback from some other native speakers if anyone has a moment to spare
Thanks indeed
Derek
Responses
1 +1 | comment | RHELLER |
4 | ground-breaking | jerrie |
4 | massive | Berni Armstrong |
4 | GREAT / grand / outstanding | Ildiko Santana |
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the last 2 parts sound good but I wouldn't recommend using "big" twice
how about other adjectives for production, like:
detailed
accurate
experienced
extraordinary
specialized
highly-specialized
spectacular
just a few ideas
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Note added at 2003-01-29 04:48:04 (GMT)
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just saw your added note.
enormous
gigantic
large
great
man-size(d)
supersized
how about other adjectives for production, like:
detailed
accurate
experienced
extraordinary
specialized
highly-specialized
spectacular
just a few ideas
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Note added at 2003-01-29 04:48:04 (GMT)
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just saw your added note.
enormous
gigantic
large
great
man-size(d)
supersized
Peer comment(s):
agree |
Tanja Abramovic (X)
13 hrs
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4 KudoZ points awarded for this answer.
Comment: "Thanks indeed to Rita et al.
This was most helpful. The fact that, while no one actually vetoed it, the "big big" solution got a lukewarm reception at best, pursuaded me to develop it by resorting to a cautious use of synonyms as advised. In the end, after much head scratching I sent off two alternatives in addition to the literal rendering, viz (fwiw) "A giant in production and distribution. A legend in quality", and the slighty cornier "A giant in production, a colossus in distribution, a legend in quality". I expect the company will stick with the literal and alien sounding proposal. Such is life. Other considerations aside, I opened the local paper today to find a headline informing me that the company to whose products this message refers is about to go to the wall. So I suppose that will mean no pay for anyone - as if we were interested in filthy lucre... ha.
Maximum respect to you all,
Derek"
23 mins
ground-breaking
as in breaking new ground
or earth-shattering
as alternatives to 'big'?
or earth-shattering
as alternatives to 'big'?
3 hrs
massive
How about playing with synonyms for big:
"Huge production! Massive distribution! Unparalleled quality!"
Brevity is a boon in advertising :-)
"Huge production! Massive distribution! Unparalleled quality!"
Brevity is a boon in advertising :-)
9 hrs
GREAT / grand / outstanding
I like the previous suggestions, too, but what about using "great" or even "grand" as a replacement? Big surely is not the snappiest choice... :)
Great or grand may be applied for all three categories, IMHO.
"Outstanding" might also work.
Or go crazy and just simply say,
"The Grand Masters of Production, Distribution, and Quality!" ;)
FWIW,
Ildiko
Great or grand may be applied for all three categories, IMHO.
"Outstanding" might also work.
Or go crazy and just simply say,
"The Grand Masters of Production, Distribution, and Quality!" ;)
FWIW,
Ildiko
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