Oct 30, 2008 01:04
16 yrs ago
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Japanese term
実態把握
Non-PRO
Japanese to English
Tech/Engineering
Manufacturing
Purchasing Management
以下のような文脈です。
購入先の実態把握
購買責任者は、主要な購入先の経営責任者と面談し、経営実態及び製造現場の実情の把握に努め、少なくとも年1回は、Directorに報告する。
ご教示よろしくお願い致します。
購入先の実態把握
購買責任者は、主要な購入先の経営責任者と面談し、経営実態及び製造現場の実情の把握に努め、少なくとも年1回は、Directorに報告する。
ご教示よろしくお願い致します。
Proposed translations
(English)
| 3 +1 | keep track of the situation |
casey
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| 3 +1 | supplier evaluation |
Krzysztof Łesyk
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Proposed translations
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6 mins
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keep track of the situation
This is how I'd translate it.
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Note added at 23 mins (2008-10-30 01:28:03 GMT)
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I was looking at the sentence, not the heading. In the heading I'd say "Keeping track of (the) supplier's situation."
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Note added at 25 mins (2008-10-30 01:29:55 GMT)
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Or maybe even "Keeping track of supplier's ability to deliver."
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Note added at 28 mins (2008-10-30 01:32:41 GMT)
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Alternatively, "Monitoring supplier's situation."
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Note added at 23 mins (2008-10-30 01:28:03 GMT)
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I was looking at the sentence, not the heading. In the heading I'd say "Keeping track of (the) supplier's situation."
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Note added at 25 mins (2008-10-30 01:29:55 GMT)
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Or maybe even "Keeping track of supplier's ability to deliver."
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Note added at 28 mins (2008-10-30 01:32:41 GMT)
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Alternatively, "Monitoring supplier's situation."
Peer comment(s):
| agree |
Yumico Tanaka (X)
: What about the word 購入先の? My bad, you are right, it was not in the question.
12 mins
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Oops. I was looking at the sentence, not the heading. //No, you're right. That changes the tense of the verb. Thanks for pointing it out.
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4 KudoZ points awarded for this answer.
Comment: "ありがとうございました！"
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1 hr
Japanese term (edited):
購入先の実態把握
supplier evaluation
今回も「実態把握」より「購入先の実態把握」を訳せばどうですか。そうしたら、他の訳(supplier status analysisなど）もいくつか考えられます。
Peer comment(s):
| agree |
casey
: This probably is more appropriate as the heading.
3 hrs
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Thanks! I'm going through a "how can I make my translations less literal and more beautiful?" phase and it seems I'm making some progress :)
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Discussion
caseyさんが提案してくださった、monitoring supplier's situation がぴったりくるように思いました。
Krzysztof さん、evaluatio and rating という項目がこの後続きます。情報が少なくてすみませんでした。