Glossary entry (derived from question below)
Chinese term or phrase:
多元化产业产（战）略格局
English translation:
diversified business structure
Chinese term
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多元化产业产略格局
This is a big chunk to digest, but my first problem is with the last part of the sentence.
Jul 30, 2007 04:06: Huijun Suo Created KOG entry
Jul 30, 2007 13:10: Huijun Suo changed "Edited KOG entry" from "<a href="/profile/614331">Huijun Suo's</a> old entry - "多元化产业产略格局"" to ""diversified business structure""
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Reliable long-term business partner
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diversified business structure
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orientalhorizon
: yes, "diversified" is a good word, not necessary to use "industry" or similar wording.
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Thank you, orientalhorizon! 产业产略 sounds a bit pompous.
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Jason Ma
: 其余部分是花哨的官腔，似乎没必要译出来，
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Thank you, Martin. 产业产略 might better be used in a State Council report:)
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The strategic structure of multiple industries.
multi-industry strategy
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Note added at 3 hrs (2007-07-16 16:18:08 GMT)
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multi-industry framework
...an industrially diversified strategic deployment...
Stance or posture might also serve in place of "deployment".
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diversified industrial landscape
multi-element industry structure
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Note added at 15 hrs (2007-07-17 04:53:00 GMT)
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GuangBo group also establish the medium to long-term program, which is to
build ※GuangBo§ as an international brand, positively develop the multi-element
industry structure in terms of Nanometre material, digital camera and smart
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