Glossary entry

French term or phrase:

se confondre avec (vb)

English translation:

become one, merge, blend (vb)

Added to glossary by Yolanda Broad
Feb 11, 2002 13:11
22 yrs ago
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French term

confondre

Non-PRO French to English Art/Literary description of landscape
I've been wearing a technical hat for the last few jobs I have done and am lacking in inspiration for this one. Any suggestions for "confondre" here?

The text is the preamble to a flowery description of a wine-producing region.

"La nature a crée ces paysages, l’homme les a enrichis. Par son travail, depuis des millénaires, il a façonné le pays. Châteaux agrippés au rocher avec lequel ils se confondent, abbayes cisterciennes, chapelles romanes, bastides languedociennes, balisent le territoire mais c’est la vigne qui définit le pays."

Discussion

Non-ProZ.com Feb 11, 2002:
Note I have "merge" and "blend" from the R&C and had already discarded them before posting my question. Maybe I should think again, but I still don't like "blend" which sounds too soft for rock, although "merge" is closer. Keep suggesting!
Non-ProZ.com Feb 11, 2002:
Note I have "merge" and "blend" from the R&C and had already discarded them before posting my question. Maybe I should think again, but I still don't like "blend" which sounds too soft for rock, although "merge" is closer. Keep suggesting!

Proposed translations

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castles clinging to the rock with which they become one

I don't think there's any idiomatic way to say this that doesn't use "clinging". I would say "become one" for the second part.
Peer comment(s):

agree Evert DELOOF-SYS : even though a bit less 'poetic' than Mary's suggestions
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4 KudoZ points awarded for this answer. Comment: "Thank you Colin, that's fine for me, although Mary's way of using "merge" started to sound convincing. Nikki"
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(with which they) blend

Cheers,

Jacek
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5 mins

... turn it around ...

castles which are almost indiscernible from the rocks/cliffs to which they cling

castles blending into the rocks which form their foundations

castles merging into one with the crags atop which they sit

Just a couple for starters

could also be chateaux, obviously, if we're talking wine ...

HTH

Mary
Peer comment(s):

agree Erika Pavelka (X) : Great suggestions!
4 mins
agree Havona : Truly poetic suggestions! Couldn't have done any better myself ;-)
12 mins
agree Meri Buettner : beautiful! Sounds like around here...
20 mins
agree Evert DELOOF-SYS : nice
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castles gripped to (a) rock(s) (and) appearing to be fused/seemingly being fused

could this be of any help?
I'm not my poetic self on a Monday :)


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confused, puzzled

it could also be bewilder, abash, disconcert, to be speechless...
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Nature created these landscapes; man enriched them. Through his labor

over the millenia he fashioned the country. Castles blend into the rock to which they cling, Cistercian abbeys...mark off the territory, but it is the vineyard that defines the country.
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+1
4 hrs

Meld

Ils se confondent: Into which they meld
Peer comment(s):

agree Tussing
8 hrs
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