Glossary entry (derived from question below)
French term or phrase:
Aucune remarque n\'a été ouverte
English translation:
No comment has been opened
Added to glossary by
claude-andrew
Aug 17, 2011 13:35
12 yrs ago
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French term
Aucune remarque n'a été ouverte
French to English
Other
Business/Commerce (general)
Quality management audit
This is puzzling me. It is a paragraph in the results of an audit on quality management (design and manufacture of a mobile phone).
Remarques
La réponse apportée à l'exigence n'est pas satisfaisante car elle ne couvre pas certains risques.
**Aucune remarque n'a été ouverte.**
Non-conformités
Il s'agit des écarts par rapport à des exigences fondamentales qui remttent en cause la confiance dans les résultats des activités.
Aucune non conformité n'a été constateé.
Remarques
La réponse apportée à l'exigence n'est pas satisfaisante car elle ne couvre pas certains risques.
**Aucune remarque n'a été ouverte.**
Non-conformités
Il s'agit des écarts par rapport à des exigences fondamentales qui remttent en cause la confiance dans les résultats des activités.
Aucune non conformité n'a été constateé.
Change log
Aug 17, 2011 15:59: philgoddard changed "Field" from "Tech/Engineering" to "Other" , "Field (specific)" from "Electronics / Elect Eng" to "Business/Commerce (general)"
Proposed translations
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No comment has been opened
Hi Claude-Andrew,
I'm presuming that within the procedure, there is such a thing as "ouvrir une remarque", either by filling out comments in a "remarques" document or by filling out a dedicated field in a database.
It's about the only sense I can make of this sentence.
In the next paragraph, it says that no incidence of non-compliance had been found but it's interesting that they don't use the same turn of phrase here.
You would expect "Aucune non conformité n'a été ouverte" wouldn't you?
It still wouldn't make sense but at least it would be consistent!
I'm presuming that within the procedure, there is such a thing as "ouvrir une remarque", either by filling out comments in a "remarques" document or by filling out a dedicated field in a database.
It's about the only sense I can make of this sentence.
In the next paragraph, it says that no incidence of non-compliance had been found but it's interesting that they don't use the same turn of phrase here.
You would expect "Aucune non conformité n'a été ouverte" wouldn't you?
It still wouldn't make sense but at least it would be consistent!
Note from asker:
Yes, that's precisely why I included the second paragraph, to show the apparent inconsistency of expression. The use of "ouvrir" does seem to imply the eventuality of the original comment being taken up by the audited company - as suggested by Mimi here. |
4 KudoZ points awarded for this answer.
Comment: "Thanks - on the basis of the client's own reply (to the effect that the company has the right to open a cmments file on the matter), yours is the most accurate answer here."
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15 mins
no proposal/remark was made
a wild guess!
Maybe after the unsatisfactory response, no other remark was made
Maybe after the unsatisfactory response, no other remark was made
1 hr
the subject was not breached OR no input was given/given OR no issue was raised
just providing alternative possibilities
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Note added at 1 hr (2011-08-17 15:08:36 GMT)
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sorry, the second suggestion should say: no opinion/input was made/given
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Note added at 1 hr (2011-08-17 15:09:19 GMT)
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ALSO: no further comment/issue was raised/made/given/added
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Note added at 1 hr (2011-08-17 15:08:36 GMT)
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sorry, the second suggestion should say: no opinion/input was made/given
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Note added at 1 hr (2011-08-17 15:09:19 GMT)
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ALSO: no further comment/issue was raised/made/given/added
Note from asker:
Thanks. This goes along with the general opinion. |
Peer comment(s):
neutral |
philgoddard
: I agree with your third suggestion - it means it was formally queried.
55 mins
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1 hr
no statement of opinion given
or this
Discussion
It's slightly reassuring to find that colleagues are unsure too.
page 17: 5. Autre raison (ouvrir une remarque)
AND HERE, also:
Problème avec la fonction de remarques du navigateur de plans
La commande du menu contextuel permettant de créer et d’OUVRIR DES REMARQUES dans la colonne Notes dans le navigateur de plans « Shots Browser » (pièce Setup, c’est-à-dire Configuration) ne fonctionne pas correctement.
http://www.apple.com/support/releasenotes/fr/Color_1.0_rn/
Ce problème a été corrigé dans Color 1.0.2.