Glossary entry

English term or phrase:

Justice via Haunting

French translation:

La justice par la hantise

Added to glossary by Thierry Darlis
Dec 13, 2012 02:16
11 yrs ago
English term

Justice via Haunting

English to French Other Poetry & Literature
here is the context :



The theme of justice is indeed ambiguous in the short stores Les Diaboliques by Jules Barbey D’Aurevilly. The stories are indeed graphically vivid, which take an unflinching perspective on life, love, sex, honor, lust, beauty and power—mostly from a masculine point of view. It is this masculine perspective which can shackle and disarm the female characters of these stories. But in each story, justice prevails on the fictional reality by allowing the females to consistently have an uncanny sense of beauty or cunning—a beauty that prevails by giving each female a bewitching or animalistic quality which endures and ends up haunting the male protagonists or disarming other female characters of the narratives. In this sense justice has fallen: while the female protagonists often don’t have the same amount of freedom or power that the male characters do, they have a strong hold on the uncanny and the bewitching and their beauty continues to haunt and bewitch time after time, regardless of whether they’re physically there or not.

Justice via Haunting in Le Rideau Cramoisi

The first instance of justice presented as an enduring, bewitching quality is in the short story, “The Crimson Curtain” (Le Rideau Cramoisi). “The story sets up a series of veils: the curtain, the table, the hand, the girl herself. Though we penetrate several layers, the mysterious reality beneath continues intact, and the girl forever remains an enigma. What is her power? What drives her?” (Pasco & Allen, 60). The girl’s power is precisely her enigmatic quality; her power resides in her ability to remain in the memory of men, despite the steady passage of time. The girl has that extreme quality of “je ne sais quoi” that the narrator sees immediately and which drives into his very soul.

Proposed translations

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La justice par la hantise

'Haunting' suggère l'inquiétude, voire l'angoisse. Pour avoir lu cette nouvelle, il me semble qu'il faut rester proche d'une traduction littérale de 'haunting'. La fille en question se venge en revenant hanter celui qui lui a fait tort. Si l'ouvrage n'était pas sur le thème de la justice j'irais jusqu'à suggérer 'vengeance' au lieu de justice. 'Bewitching' confirme que si l'on est ici peut-être dans le domaine de la magie, il s'agit plus d'une sorcellerie cauchemardesque que d'un enchantement onirique.
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agree GILLES MEUNIER
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agree katsy
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agree Germaine
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4 KudoZ points awarded for this answer. Comment: "merci et bonnes fêtes"
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justtice par (truchement d)'enchantement

The text is thought provoking. I would propose Justice par enchantement, till we have a better translation. Take care
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disagree guillaumeratel : I find 'enchantement' to be too positive for this.
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justice par envoûtement

La fille envahit l'esprit de l'homme et l'envoûte.
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neutral Germaine : On est proche, mais il me semble qu'il y manque la petite note "noire" que comportent, par exemple, les synonymes ensorcellement ou sortilèges.
3 days 8 hrs
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le spectre de la justice

S'éloigner de la formule de départ est peut-être le moyen de s'en tirer.
Ou "le spectre et la justice", "la justice par le spectre" ou "justice fantomatique" si vous préférez garder la structure originelle.
Peer comment(s):

disagree Germaine : On peut difficilement s'éloigner puisque c'est le sujet du paragraphe, qui aborde l'aspect hantise, une espèce d'envoûtement obsessif.
3 days 7 hrs
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la justice ensorceleuse

Je ne garderais pas la structure avec "par", elle ne me paraît pas très idiomatique (en anglais non plus, d'ailleurs).
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