Jul 12, 2004 10:57
20 yrs ago
English term
and in many cases
English to Chinese
Tech/Engineering
IT (Information Technology)
Currently, a full-blown IDS/P solution is very expensive and inordinately complicated for all except the biggest organisations, and in many cases remote or distributed large enterprise locations where an integrated, dedicated system is easier and more cost-effective to deploy, maintain and update.
试译:
目前,对大企业以外的组织而言,成熟的IDS/IDP解决方案非常昂贵、非常复杂。而在许多情况下,在大企业的远程或分布式位置,部署、维护及更新专用的集成系统更简单、更经济。
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我觉得这句话似乎有语病,前后句无法衔接起来。
还是我的理解有误?
试译:
目前,对大企业以外的组织而言,成熟的IDS/IDP解决方案非常昂贵、非常复杂。而在许多情况下,在大企业的远程或分布式位置,部署、维护及更新专用的集成系统更简单、更经济。
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我觉得这句话似乎有语病,前后句无法衔接起来。
还是我的理解有误?
Proposed translations
(Chinese)
3 +3 | rephrase | Denyce Seow |
4 +1 | 试译 | Lu Zou |
4 | 而在许多情况下...也会是 | Wenjer Leuschel (X) |
Proposed translations
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rephrase
Rephrase:
a full-blown IDS/P solution is very expensive and inordinately complicated for .............,in many cases, remote or distributed large enterprise locations where an integrated, dedicated system is easier and more cost-effective to deploy, maintain and update.
The full blown IDS/P solution is expensive for remote/distributed large enterprises that have different locations; an integrated dedicated system is easier......
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Note added at 19 mins (2004-07-12 11:16:48 GMT)
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That means:
In many cases, for those large enterprises that have remote or distributed locations, IDS/P is an expensive and complicated solution. In such cases, an integrated, dedicated system is easier to deploy, maintain and update.
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Note added at 25 mins (2004-07-12 11:22:33 GMT)
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My try:
目前,对大企业以外的组织而言,成熟的IDS/IDP解决方案非常昂贵、非常复杂。而在许多情况下,这对有远程或分布式位置的大企业也一样,这些企业反之采用集成系统将使部署、维护及更新工作更简单、更经济。
Hehehe... 不是很顺,不过意思应该还可以了。
a full-blown IDS/P solution is very expensive and inordinately complicated for .............,in many cases, remote or distributed large enterprise locations where an integrated, dedicated system is easier and more cost-effective to deploy, maintain and update.
The full blown IDS/P solution is expensive for remote/distributed large enterprises that have different locations; an integrated dedicated system is easier......
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Note added at 19 mins (2004-07-12 11:16:48 GMT)
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That means:
In many cases, for those large enterprises that have remote or distributed locations, IDS/P is an expensive and complicated solution. In such cases, an integrated, dedicated system is easier to deploy, maintain and update.
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Note added at 25 mins (2004-07-12 11:22:33 GMT)
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My try:
目前,对大企业以外的组织而言,成熟的IDS/IDP解决方案非常昂贵、非常复杂。而在许多情况下,这对有远程或分布式位置的大企业也一样,这些企业反之采用集成系统将使部署、维护及更新工作更简单、更经济。
Hehehe... 不是很顺,不过意思应该还可以了。
Peer comment(s):
agree |
Shaun Yeo
: Perfect understanding. There is a saying widely used by Singaporean soccer fans when they see a carefully built up attack goes haywire. It goes like this "The idea is good but the execution needs polishing." :-)
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Hahaha, 那你也来一个!! 都说了我的中文是半桶水!!! :p *malu (embarrassed)*
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agree |
bhan
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Thanks............. but the Chinese version is not so good. Hehe... :p
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agree |
Lu Zou
10 hrs
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4 KudoZ points awarded for this answer.
Comment: "谢谢!"
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而在许多情况下...也会是
...而在许多情况下,有远程或分支位置的大企业,采用专用的集成系统来部署、维护及更新也会是更为简易、更加经济。
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试译
同意denyce的解释。只是将你和denyce的意见综合一下,不知是否妥当。
目前,完善的IDS/IDP解决方案价格昂贵,结构复杂,只适用于某些大企业,但在许多情况下,这些大企业的位置比较偏远或分散,(这种地理位置)更需要一个专用的集成系统,使系统的部署、维护及更新更加简单、更加经济。
目前,完善的IDS/IDP解决方案价格昂贵,结构复杂,只适用于某些大企业,但在许多情况下,这些大企业的位置比较偏远或分散,(这种地理位置)更需要一个专用的集成系统,使系统的部署、维护及更新更加简单、更加经济。
Peer comment(s):
agree |
Denyce Seow
: Hmm... the meaning is a little different now... especially for this part: 但在许多情况下,这些大企业的位置比较偏远或分散
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