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Stay with us on the jargon here. Network admission control is Cisco's baby, and it's all about controlling which devices connect to your network: Are they clean of viruses? Are security settings up to date? If not, quarantine. Network access control (or in Microsoft's parlance, network access protection) addresses what devices can do once they're on the network—checking the PC's or printer's profile against a directory server or access control server {for privileges}. No vendors offer both network access control and network admission control, and cooperation among vendors is just starting.
对照目录服务器或者访问控制服务器来检查个人电脑或打印机的安全状况，以便授予相应权限。
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