May 1, 2008 14:41
16 yrs ago
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French term
des actifs puisés au sein de la nature
French to English
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Cosmetics, Beauty
bon clair le sens mais en faire qque chose d'un peu palatable en anglais, je sèche
Il s'agit d'une gamme de crèmes pour le visage... bon certes, il y a issued, originating in and the like... but can anyone find me something more worthy of being printed on packaging
Sorry if infringing rules by asking for 2 phrases, but how on earth can I separate them
To recap c'est puisé et actifs mon souci!
If anyone objects will put in separate questions
Il s'agit d'une gamme de crèmes pour le visage... bon certes, il y a issued, originating in and the like... but can anyone find me something more worthy of being printed on packaging
Sorry if infringing rules by asking for 2 phrases, but how on earth can I separate them
To recap c'est puisé et actifs mon souci!
If anyone objects will put in separate questions
Proposed translations
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natural active substances
"Cosmetic skin cleanser based on natural active substances - US Patent 5993857 from Patent Storm. A cosmetic skin cleanser based on natural active ..."
IMO
IMO
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Thanks Dr Jones!
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4 KudoZ points awarded for this answer.
Comment: "thks to all of you for everything"
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actifs = active ingredients (en langage codé) puisés = taken from
active ingredients "plucked" from nature
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Cath St Clair (X)
: mmm... I like your 'plucked'!
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active ingredients sourced from nature's own offerings
... that spring from the very heart of nature
... that spring from nature itself
some ideas :)
... that spring from nature itself
some ideas :)
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ChrisGT
: I like this!
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Thanks Chris :)
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Sophie Raimondo
: I like "that spring from the very heart of nature"
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Thanks SophieAnne :)
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Aude Sylvain
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MatthewLaSon
: Flowerly language in cosmetic descriptions is encouraged, but I think you've gone too far here. Modern English would rarely be this ornate and verbose in such a context. It may read better if you get rid of "sourced" and "offerings", imho.
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Hmmm... I think you're right here - 'active ingredients from nature' sound more like the kind of thing you'd read on a packet... ;)
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active ingredients derived from Mother Nature herself
To comment on comments above, some creams do have active ingredients in them. It depends I guess on what kind of cream it is.
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(purely) natural active ingredients
Hello,
This is what I'd say.
Look here:http://www.simpleregeneration.com.au/simpleregeneration/Simp...
This is what I'd say.
Look here:http://www.simpleregeneration.com.au/simpleregeneration/Simp...
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...drawn from...
(active) ingredients/agents drawn from nature itself/the very heart of nature
Just another thought
Just another thought
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