Mar 30, 2006 12:35
18 yrs ago
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Spanish term

Aportamos soluciones, nos comprometemos

Spanish to English Tech/Engineering Computers: Software EDI
A software company slogan. "We provide solutions..." is OK for the first part, but I need a snappy phrase for the "nos comprometemos" part. Any ideas out there?

Proposed translations

+1
46 mins
Selected

Total Solution Commitment

A short suggestion :-)
Peer comment(s):

agree Jerónimo Fernández
19 mins
Thank you, Jerónimo!
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4 KudoZ points awarded for this answer. Comment: "I'll go for this, after all brevity is the soul of wit - thanks to all for your help :-)"
3 mins

we provide solutions, we commit ourselves to

mi opción
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+3
15 mins

Providing solutions and ensuring commitment

An option.
Peer comment(s):

agree Susana Magnani : i like media's also
10 mins
Thanks
agree Hattie Hill
12 mins
Thanks
agree Denise DeVries
33 mins
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+7
19 mins

We bring solutions - that's our promise!

And once it gets into print, 'that's' could usefully get some typographical emphasis.
Peer comment(s):

agree tazdog (X) : or the "provide" the asker mentioned instead of "bring"
2 mins
agree Susana Magnani : i like tracey's also.. couldn't make up my mind ...
6 mins
agree Dr. Andrew Frankland : I prefer "provide"
7 mins
agree Hattie Hill
7 mins
agree Emilie : Provide!!!!
13 mins
agree Hasselt : I prefer provide also
4 hrs
agree Paula Hernández
5 hrs
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+2
45 mins

Committed to providing solutions [for your IT needs]

I think that "bring solutions" is terribly clunky and "that's our promise" unacceptably hokey.

"Ensuring commitment" is also an awkward and vacuous phrase.

I would advocate recasting the entire phrase, along the lines I suggest here, in order to incorporate in a coherent manner the two key ideas of "solutions" and "commitment".

Suerte.
Peer comment(s):

agree Marijke Singer : Ouch!
15 mins
Thank you, Marijke. :-D
agree Roxana Cortijo
21 mins
Thank you, Roxana.
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2 hrs

We provide solutions, that's our commitment.

We provide solutions, that's our commitment.
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5 hrs

Dedicated to providing solutions

another option and a way to avoid commitment, committed etc
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