Mar 30, 2006 12:35
18 yrs ago
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Spanish term
Aportamos soluciones, nos comprometemos
Spanish to English
Tech/Engineering
Computers: Software
EDI
A software company slogan. "We provide solutions..." is OK for the first part, but I need a snappy phrase for the "nos comprometemos" part. Any ideas out there?
Proposed translations
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Proposed translations
+1
46 mins
Selected
Total Solution Commitment
A short suggestion :-)
4 KudoZ points awarded for this answer.
Comment: "I'll go for this, after all brevity is the soul of wit - thanks to all for your help :-)"
3 mins
we provide solutions, we commit ourselves to
mi opción
+3
15 mins
Providing solutions and ensuring commitment
An option.
Peer comment(s):
agree |
Susana Magnani
: i like media's also
10 mins
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Thanks
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agree |
Hattie Hill
12 mins
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Thanks
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agree |
Denise DeVries
33 mins
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+7
19 mins
We bring solutions - that's our promise!
And once it gets into print, 'that's' could usefully get some typographical emphasis.
Peer comment(s):
agree |
tazdog (X)
: or the "provide" the asker mentioned instead of "bring"
2 mins
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agree |
Susana Magnani
: i like tracey's also.. couldn't make up my mind ...
6 mins
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agree |
Dr. Andrew Frankland
: I prefer "provide"
7 mins
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agree |
Hattie Hill
7 mins
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agree |
Emilie
: Provide!!!!
13 mins
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agree |
Hasselt
: I prefer provide also
4 hrs
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agree |
Paula Hernández
5 hrs
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+2
45 mins
Committed to providing solutions [for your IT needs]
I think that "bring solutions" is terribly clunky and "that's our promise" unacceptably hokey.
"Ensuring commitment" is also an awkward and vacuous phrase.
I would advocate recasting the entire phrase, along the lines I suggest here, in order to incorporate in a coherent manner the two key ideas of "solutions" and "commitment".
Suerte.
"Ensuring commitment" is also an awkward and vacuous phrase.
I would advocate recasting the entire phrase, along the lines I suggest here, in order to incorporate in a coherent manner the two key ideas of "solutions" and "commitment".
Suerte.
Peer comment(s):
agree |
Marijke Singer
: Ouch!
15 mins
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Thank you, Marijke. :-D
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agree |
Roxana Cortijo
21 mins
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Thank you, Roxana.
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2 hrs
We provide solutions, that's our commitment.
We provide solutions, that's our commitment.
5 hrs
Dedicated to providing solutions
another option and a way to avoid commitment, committed etc
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